Time and Narration
A 10 minute story rarely covers 10 minutes of events from beginning to end - some parts are compressed and others expanded. Not only that, but flashbacks and other effects are used to jump backwards and forwards in time. J.M. Coetzee wrote that " For the reader, the experience of time bunching and becoming dense at points of significant action in the story, or thinning out and skipping or glancing through nonsignificant periods of clock time or calendar time, can be exhilarating - in fact it may be at the heart of narrative pleasure . I think some short-story writers underuse these effects, so I'd like to talk about them now. Speed Changes of speed are so common in all forms of storytelling that we hardly notice them. Here are some examples compression: "So we lived in Texas for five years, and then we moved to California." expansion: "All of the sudden it occurred to me in a flash of insight that she never really loved me and had only been using me to make h...